I guess I like how your 5th one is sort of vague on what the person is guilty about so it really lets the reader imagine what it might be and there is not really a right answer.
The second story is really well-written, and it addresses to some problems we are facing in our society today. It has deep meaning. I think it's a great story
The fourth one really stands out, and what makes it like that is the last two words. It's also really nice how they're separated by periods, making it much more dramatic.
All of these leave me speechless. I love the idea behind every one. Very well thought out and I can imagine that anyone can sit down and write novels around any of these six sentences.
I guess I like how your 5th one is sort of vague on what the person is guilty about so it really lets the reader imagine what it might be and there is not really a right answer.
ReplyDeleteThe 4th one to me is very striking. It is simultaneously ambiguous and specific. One begins to wonder about the relationship that the two people had.
ReplyDeleteThe second story is really well-written, and it addresses to some problems we are facing in our society today. It has deep meaning. I think it's a great story
ReplyDeleteThe fourth one really stands out, and what makes it like that is the last two words. It's also really nice how they're separated by periods, making it much more dramatic.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the fourth one with the two word sentences that still made a powerful impact.
ReplyDeleteAll of these leave me speechless. I love the idea behind every one. Very well thought out and I can imagine that anyone can sit down and write novels around any of these six sentences.
ReplyDeleteAll of these sentences utilize striking situations, an element that makes such "flash fiction" far more interesting. Great usage.
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